I planed to leave comm of every amv posted at g-amv so I'll put it here.
Something that bugged me during the watch was the fact that you said you intentionaly didn't made any attempt at storytelling, but some scenes choices were a bit misleading, some were looking like you were trying to show something, but the most random ones put me out of the perceived concept. for example, the intro book, and some sequences like The blond guy past or the blond girl falling from the tower at the beginning, seemed to be less random than expected. It's not a bad thing, but mixing "coherence" and "random" was confusing for me.
another thing was the noise effects after the first chorus (tv effect), it was too sharp and felt really "added" and not blending through it. And sadly, it wasn't really useful in a theoric way. you wouldn't have lost anything by removing it. I would suggest you watch Kyros's Bloodlust video for comparision (his noices had more impact and color integration when used).
The video was also a bit long. It's kinda hard to keep a good pace over 4 minutes, particulary when you do a random type of AMV. 1 minute less would have been better , in my opinion.
The dramatic sequence before the last verse/chorus had most of the time a good vibe. just some scenes choices felt a bit static or strange. ( and i really can't picture Happy in a sad moment of music XD )
Aside that, i felt there was a really consequent effort into the amv. Some masking were interesting, and the book sequence was really cool ( i would have love if you would have continued using this book for AE/texting moments, it would have added a lot of variation in your video).
Sadly i had to put your finalist video last considering all the criteras, but rest assured, it was worthy for the convention. It wasn't for nothing that we picked it for the festival. And the public seemed to have liked it a lot (you were tied at 4th position for public choice over 30 AMVs). So i hope you'll offer us another one next year
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I'll be waiting for the next one.
Miér 20 Mar 2024, 7:57 pm por tordo02
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