The beginning is too slow and I really did not like that typography first because is too difficult to read it and second because is like hard, I mean too static.
0:23 – 0:34 this is too slow, long scenes etc.
0:35 I think here should have started the lip sync in instead of here 0:40. Furthermore the lip sync did not match pretty well with the audio, it seemed like if you put the scenes so fast and you did not pay too much attention to lip sync. However I think the lip sync is more or less it could pass but is not pretty good.
0:49 – 1:09 there are a lot scenes too slow in that part because you did not use battery but that was not the problem because in some cases you used it, the main problem was some scenes a bit long in which did not sync pretty well the audio and the video and you lost a bit the flow.
Cool the rest I think is pretty good but you continue losing the flow and later you got it again.
The video needs more impact for a lot
There are some rough transitions 0:43, 0:47…
Good effect and good scenes selection, mask, quality…
The video sometimes is a bit random.
Well the rest you know it, I loved it is you best job so far, keep up!